Epub kindle Succubus Lord – sinsenos3.us
Eric Vall Ï 4 Read & DownloadWhat could have been an interesting story was ushed through the pages using nothing than writer s convenience to advance the plot The entire path to conflict with the first enemy should have been the entire story allowing plenty of oom to get to know the characters with a longer introduction and allowing plenty of dramatic character interaction to let the eader experience a little back story before the big fightInstead what we get is about five minutes of setup then Bad Guy appears FIGHTThat basic structure epeats itself three times through t I got about thirty pages into this before putting it down The writing uality pacing #characterization and descriptions are all very poor and #and descriptions are all very poor and would definitely not ecommend spending money on this The only two things preventing this from being a one star are that the plot is elatively original and interesting and the fact that I ecognize eaders of the nerd erotica genre probably care less about writing uality than most eaderships out thereThat said if you want to ead about succubus orgies there are definitely better options out there As an introduction to another of Eric Vall s series it begins at a little bit of a sluggish pace which is possibly its only crux once you get over that it pans out and around evealing a bit of a humerous eadWould ecommend this and the series Doesn t take itself it to serious which works super recommend this and the series Doesn
t take itself it to serious which works super with how the characters are described bit fun andtake itself it to serious which works super with how the characters are described bit fun and than usual which is a nice change of pace This is definitely aunchy than the. Disclaimer #1 This series is about a guy that summons a harem of hot. Author s other books but is mainly in the
"Character InteractionsI Don T Remember "interactionsI don t emember being any descriptions of the bedroom antics that the MC gets into or the supporting characters The only idea of what happened is eal This entire book is immature The descriptions the dialog even the world building was completely immatureSome examples areThe best oom at a casino hotel that has 500 bottles world building was completely immatureSome examples areThe best oom at a casino hotel that has 500 bottles champagne is 250 a nightThe author thinks an alternator starts a vehicleThe oommate of the MC blows half the ent money on a demon book and the MC laughs about it The book is fine very entertaining and funny The plot isn t very original but is fairly good The magic system is very creative and well doneThe characters are good the MC and his buddy are very funny and well developed But the women are one dimensional they are there for the fanservice and the needed exposition They aren t very appealing charactersThere is a trend in these books one I don t like that the MC #embraces his new life and all its craziness at ones without any #his new life and all its craziness at ones without any I understand this kind of book doesn t have much depth but the way they act is weird and the uickness to develop and use the magic is too much A person has to train years of years to master something it doesn t use his ecently acuired powers with mastery in a few minutes and definitely not to defat a master daemon with thousands of years of experienceThe last thing I want to address is the lazy blurb I can t understand what the author was thinking Is he focusing on his established Succubus women and then battles demon lords to save the worldDisclaim. Eader base Because these crappy blurbs aren t the way to add new eaders A worthwhile ead but i kind aren t the way to add new eaders A worthwhile ead but i kind hoped for sex scenes i mean they are succubus after all maybe I just know what i like The Kindle store suggests books based on your ecent eading and I generally like this kind of fictionHowever this book was simply terrible The writing was just poor The action scenes were boring The sex scenes were boringThere was no character developmentI will actively avoid this author from now on The story has potential action and snark abound sex scenes not so much
"It Promises Much But Doesn "promises much but doesn eally deliver kinda like the super hot woman who only teases Definitely a maybe on any books I got this book for the amazing cover and people even other authors telling me how adult this book is and was sadly disappointed The most graphic you get is the MC s D being grabbed and a fade to black so I don t know what people are talking about when they e mention the sex scenes Yeah he gets laid but so does James Bond and that s PG 13 I ve seen action on teen drama made for TVCharacter development is abysmal His best friend becomes his I had never ead a Eric Vall book before this one but the cover looked interesting tempting So I gave it a go I am glad I did I confess my knowledge of succubi demons is hazy doesn t matter This is a fun book to ead Loved it Maybe we all need a couple of succubi in our lives Absolutely loved this first part of the series not a clue what Eric was on when he created Todd but its pure genius keep it Er #2 It's way aunchier than my other novels You'll probably love it.